May I write a letter,
Which contain an intent,
To wish you be better,
May this letter be sent.
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May I write a letter,
Which contain an intent,
To wish you be better,
May this letter be sent.
Website: https://writeallywrite.wordpress.com/
Twitter: @allylmare
Facebook: Facebook profile
Get my new poetry e-book for FREE: It’s All About You
yeah, i read it twice and i liked it a lot, had to read it again to get the voice, and i got the voice, it sounded good, short, simple, and the odd twist on syntax with “which contain an intent,” sells it to me. Like it.
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Thank you! Glad you like and very nice feedback as well. Also, it comes with 7 syllable for each line. 😀
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so many letters left unsent because pride stood in the way when all we wanted to say was a simple hello how are you. You contained it so well in this short tight poem!
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It is! what made it easier we have texting nowadays and somehow… even some people having problems to text!
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Totally understand and agree. I love letter writing and have all the letters my friends have sent me since I was in junior high school. But some letters and words are more difficult to write and send out. Thanks for a lovely post Ally!
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