NaPoWriMo #12: a poem that explicitly incorporates alliteration and assonance (You will just ruin my day)

Croak, croak said the frog,
Cracking sounds through the fog,
Drip, drip between the leak,
Waking me from my peak,

Lack, lack in my sleep,
Losing dreams in the sweep,
Fair, fair do not say,
You will just ruin my day.

Published by Ally L.

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Singledust says:

April 13, 2017 at 12:43 am

you did this well Ally. the use of words really briliant. I liked the repitition you chose.

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1. Ally L. Mare says:
  
  April 13, 2017 at 3:06 am
  
  Thank you, Singledust. I feel like, I’m writing a spell somehow. haha.
  
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  1. Singledust says:
    
    April 13, 2017 at 3:09 am
    
    sounded so!😆
    
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Sithara says:

April 13, 2017 at 6:15 am

Hi! I’ve challenged you for the writer’s ink challenge! Here’s a link to my post and let me know if you do it! 🙂

Writer’s Ink Challenge

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1. Ally L. Mare says:
  
  April 13, 2017 at 9:55 am
  
  Hi Sithara. Thanks for challenging me! I’m sure to participate. 😀
  
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  1. Sithara says:
    
    April 13, 2017 at 10:28 am
    
    You’re welcome!
    
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